I try to read and write some small poetry each morning, somewhere between the early walk, the yoga, and the attempted meditation. Because I am usually on a self-imposed and wholly arbitrary schedule, and also getting a bit lazier as I mature, these poems are more often than not haikus. My readings include some serious poets, and trying to find an epigraph and express my reactions or insights in seventeen syllables poses a good challenge. Most of the time, I see my haiku as reductive and expressive of a lesser poet, but sometimes I quite like them. I am presenting here several from the first five months of this slowly widening world, probably not the best, but ones I liked well enough to share with my online poetry reading last Saturday.
Your challenge is to respond in the comments section with a haiku of your own. If enough people respond to make it interesting, I will pick a winner, based on criteria which will be all mine and likely as mysterious to me as to you. The winner will receive a copy of the now-out-of-print classic, Chopping Wood and Carrying Water, a 1980's anthology with poems by Roslyn Strohl, Norma Grunwald, and me, and drawings by Marian Stevens. If you already have CWCW, a suitable substitute will be found at the discretion of the judge (me). I'd just love to see some feedback. So get to scribbling, please!
JANUARY – MAY, 2021 HAIKU
At
the bottom of
the
well, enlightenment starts.
I
bring moon to well.
Jan.
7
(RUMI) This is how a human being can change:
…Suddenly,
he wakes up,
Call
it grace, whatever…
This
is how a country can change:
it
wakes up, call it
Grace,
or insight, or terror.
It
votes for the good.
Jan.
21 (I know, it’s not a haiku – cheating a bit here).
What
calls you is you
walking
the outline of your
face
on the blank world
Jan.
27
(Rumi)
I have lived on the lip of insanity
Luckily
I jumped
Before
I was a tasty
Morsel
for Satan.
Oh
no, Rumi! Love
Is
your grandson’s warm wet kisses,
His
sister’s, “Gwamma!”
(Rumi)
Dive in the ocean, leave and let the sea be you.
I
am ninety-eight
percent
Pacific, Atlantic, Med,
etc.;
salt seas are me.
(Rumi)
Everywhere is falling / everywhere
I
will ride falling
skies from nowhere into
nowhere. Then I’ll be home.
I don't haiku but enjoy yours
ReplyDeleteThis is so compelling and begs for more.
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